Grapes of wrath — Reading Notes
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id, “we’ll awa’ back to the dressin’ station, and the first train to the North. This is no’ just a health resort to be bidin’ in. Good luck to you, lads.”
“Good luck, so long,” chorused the trench after them, and the two vanished from sight.
There was a buzz of excited talk after they had gone--talk that lasted until word was passed back along the trench and the line rose and commenced to stumble onward again.
“I suppose,” said Larry, “they’ll be moving us up in support. I hope we get out of this beastly trench soon, and see something of what’s going on.”
Billy Simson grunted. “Maybe we’ll see plenty, and maybe a bit too much, when we get out of here,” he said, “and it is decently safe down here anyhow.”
Pug snorted. “Safe?” he echoed; “no safer than it is above there, by the look of them two Jocks. They don’t seem to be worritin’ much about it being safe. I believe we would be all right to climb up out of this sewer and walk like bloomin’ two-legged humans above ground, instead of crawling along ’ere like rats in a ’Ampton Court maze of drains.”
But, whether they liked it or not, the Stonewalls were condemned to spend most of that day in their drains. They moved out at last, it is true, from the communication trench into one of the support trenches, and from this they could catch an occasional narrow glimpse of the battlefield. They were little the wiser for that, partly because the view gave only a restricted vision of a maze of twisting lines of parapets, of which they could tell no difference between British and German; of tangles of rusty barbed wire; and, beyond these things, of a drifting haze of smoke, of puffing white bursts of cotton wool-like smoke from shrapnel, and of the high explosives spouting gushes of heavy black smoke, that leaped from the ground and rose in tall columns with slow-spreading tops. They could not even tell which of these shells were friends’ and which were foes’, or whether they were falling in the British or the German lines.
Pug was frankly disgusted with the whole performance.
“The people at ’ome,” he complained, “will see a blinkin’ sight more of this show in the picture papers and the kinema shows than me what’s ’ere in the middle of it.”
“Don’t you fret, Pug,” said Larry; “we’ll see all we’re looking for presently. Those regiments up front must have had a pretty hot strafing, and they’re certain to push us up from the supports into the firing-line.”
“I don’t see what you’ve got to grumble about,” put in Billy Simson; “we’re snug and comfortable enough here, and personally I’m not in any hurry to be trottin’ out over the open, with the German Army shootin’ at me.”
“I admit I’m not in any hurry to get plugged myself,” drawled Kentucky, “but I’ve got quite a big mite of sympathy for Pug’s feelings. I’m sure getting some impatient myself.”
“Anyway,” said Pug, “it’s about time we ’ad some grub; who’s feelin’ like a chunk of bully and a pavin’-stone?”
The others suddenly woke to the fact that they also were hungry. Bully beef and biscuits were produced, and the four sat and ate their meal, and lit cigarettes, and smoked contentedly after it, with the roar of battle ringing in their ears, with the shells rumbling and moaning overhead, and the bullets piping and hissing and singing past above their trench.
After their meal, in the close, stagnant air of the trench they began to feel drowsy, and presently they settled themselves in the most comfortable positions possible, and dozed off to sleep. They slept for a good half hour, heedless of all the turmoil about them, and they were roused by a word passed down along the trench.
They rose, and shook the packs into place on their shoulders, tightened and settled the straps about them, patted their ammunition pouches, felt the bayonets slip freely in their scabbards, tried the bolts and action of their rifles, and then stood waiting with a curious thrill, that was made up of expectation, of excitement, of fear, perhaps--they hardly knew what. For the word passed along had been to get ready, that the battalion was moving up into the firing-line.
The order came at last to move, and the men began to work their way along the support trench to the communication trenches which led up into the forward lines.
Boyd Cable’s Grapes of Wrath (1917) immerses the reader in the First World War through the eyes of a British infantry unit, the Stonewalls, during the Battle of the Somme. The narrative relies heavily on colloquial dialogue and sensory description to convey the physical and psychological pressures of trench warfare. Cable, who served as a forward artillery officer, draws on firsthand experience to render the chaos of shellfire, the labor of trench repair, and the laconic humor of men under duress. The excerpts show a writer more interested in capturing the texture of a moment—the weight of a sandbag, the drone of a shell—than in advancing a conventional plot.
Dialogue as a Window into Character
Cable’s soldiers speak in distinct vernaculars that reveal their origins and temperaments. Pug, a Cockney, uses phrases like “Gaw’strewth” and “I’m blowed if I know anythink about it,” while Kentucky employs Americanisms such as “I’m some worried” and “Jes’ look and see ’em come a-boiling.” This linguistic contrast is not merely decorative; it underscores the composite nature of the British forces in 1916, which included volunteers from across the Empire. The men’s exchanges are terse, often sardonic, and rarely sentimental. When Pug complains about the endless digging, his humor is a coping mechanism: “I was beginnin’ to think this trench was good enough for anythin’.” The dialogue thus serves both characterization and the larger theme of endurance.
The Sensory Landscape of the Trenches
Cable builds his scenes through a relentless accumulation of sounds, sights, and physical sensations. Shells are described as “shrieking,” “crackling,” and “dropping ponderously in geyser-like spoutings of mud and earth and smoke.” The air “sang to the drone and whine of flying shell fragments.” This auditory overload is matched by tactile details: Pug “heaving a half-split sandbag into place” and “flattening it down with the blows of a broken pick-handle.” The narrative rarely pauses for reflection; instead, it thrusts the reader into the immediate, overwhelming present. Cable’s prose is functional and precise, avoiding metaphor in favor of reportorial clarity, which heightens the sense of authenticity.
Structure and the Rhythm of Combat
The excerpted passage follows a clear episodic pattern: a lull in shelling, a sudden intensification, the order to “stand to,” and the sight of a German counter-attack. This rhythm mirrors the unpredictable tempo of trench warfare. Cable uses the interval between barrages to allow brief exchanges of dialogue, then disrupts them with renewed violence. The officer’s command to “chuck it out in front” and Pug’s muttered complaint about being kept in the dark illustrate the gap between strategic knowledge and the soldier’s limited perspective. The narrative stays tightly focused on what the men can see and hear, never adopting an omniscient view of the battle. This structural choice reinforces the theme of limited understanding under fire.
The Role of the Artillery in the Narrative
Artillery dominates the action, both as a physical threat and as a subject of dark humor. Pug mocks newspaper clichés like “ar-tillery doo-el,” while another soldier notes that gunners “let each other alone and each hammer the other lot’s infantry.” This cynicism reflects the infantryman’s view of the war: the guns are impersonal, relentless, and largely beyond their control. Cable, himself an artillery officer, does not glamorize the gunners; instead, he shows how their fire shapes the infantry’s world. The “deep and constant roar of gun-fire throbbing and booming” becomes a backdrop against which all human action takes place. The counter-attack arrives not as a surprise but as the logical next phase in a mechanical cycle of violence.
Readers approaching Grapes of Wrath should expect a narrow, intense focus on the physical and verbal texture of trench life rather than a sweeping narrative of the Somme. Cable’s strength lies in his ear for dialogue and his ability to render chaos without losing clarity. The novel rewards attention to the small details—the way a man wipes his forehead, the shape of a shell burst—that together create a vivid, unromantic portrait of men under pressure.
There’s something about Boyd Cable’s men, their weary colloquial grit, that stays with you long after the guns fall quiet. It made me think of the quieter ache in A Rainy June, and Other Stories — Themes and Context, where the rain does what the artillery can’t, and the aftermath feels just as heavy. Both leave you listening for voices that have stopped.
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